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Thrash by ~idiotbassist2:iconidiotbassist2:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Fixed




I am a girl
Living in this world
Full of melodramatic lies
And fake cries

I am a girl
Trudging through this world
Full of false witnesses
And shallow kisses

I am a girl
Running from this world
Full of abuse and lies
And a lack of the wise

I am a girl
TRASHING in this world
Full of deathly stares
NO one cares
My eyes screamed the words
That were never heard
Shake my head
This cant happen again
No one knew
What would happen to you
No one heard you die
No one grew
In this world I thought I knew
Because maybe
They're all lies
©2005-2009 ~idiotbassist2
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This is another quickie, I would love a comment on it!

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~MykeAtroxDunkerley Mar 27, 2005, 5:57:17 PM
Thats a really nice poem, I was reading it like a song when I read it though so meh :D

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~sawmetopieces Mar 28, 2005, 1:41:42 AM
trashing in this world

full of deathly stares

noone cares


wahhh these lines really empowered the body of your piece.. great descriptive words that gave clear imagery.

:heart: it :)

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~idiotbassist2 Mar 28, 2005, 12:35:30 PM
thanks people..i appriciate it woot

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~thelongshanks Mar 29, 2005, 5:24:15 PM
Thats fuckin badass, I still feel that way, except the whole I am a girl thing. You pretty much summed shit up as the way it is. Hell yeah.

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~idiotbassist2 Mar 29, 2005, 5:32:22 PM
fuck yes, thank you!

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This may hurt a little but it's something you'll get used to. - Tool

S.F.M., I'll wait for you.
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