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I am a girl
Living in this world
Full of melodramatic lies
And fake cries

I am a girl
Trudging through this world
Full of false witnesses
And shallow kisses

I am a girl
Running from this world
Full of abuse and lies
And a lack of the wise

I am a girl
TRASHING in this world
Full of deathly stares
NO one cares
My eyes screamed the words
That were never heard
Shake my head
This cant happen again
No one knew
What would happen to you
No one heard you die
No one grew
In this world I thought I knew
Because maybe
They're all lies
©2005-2009 ~idiotbassist2
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This is another quickie, I would love a comment on it!
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Thats a really nice poem, I was reading it like a song when I read it though so meh :D

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trashing in this world

full of deathly stares

noone cares


wahhh these lines really empowered the body of your piece.. great descriptive words that gave clear imagery.

:heart: it :)

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Thats fuckin badass, I still feel that way, except the whole I am a girl thing. You pretty much summed shit up as the way it is. Hell yeah.

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fuck yes, thank you!

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